tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-692434648552147064.post8212427541931091989..comments2024-03-06T06:03:13.602-05:00Comments on The Song of These Streets: Tragedy of Errors: A Story of Rape and ConsentXiomara A. Maldonadohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16759826955882585699noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-692434648552147064.post-41466638047400568672009-08-21T16:19:37.724-04:002009-08-21T16:19:37.724-04:00that story is off the fucking hook!!! i was readin...that story is off the fucking hook!!! i was reading waiting to see what happens next ... i love the way you give the details its like reading "Memento" ... the fragments allow the reader to be disoriented along with the character/victim, i really think you have something here that can be worked into a longer format ... you know i'm on my short story shit a great way to share truth and learning's ... as my sister says write or die ... blessings, MMhttp://marcusjsmalls.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.com